Mālō e lelei Helisa, Thanks for sharing about your experience of mall shopping. I like how you used descriptive words such as ' like homeless people' and 'crashing though the skirts'. Do you think you could find an image that fits better with your recount? Mrs Krausse
Mālō e lelei Helisa,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing about your experience of mall shopping. I like how you used descriptive words such as ' like homeless people' and 'crashing though the skirts'. Do you think you could find an image that fits better with your recount?
Mrs Krausse
Thank you, I appreciate the advice and the compliments Maria. I would try and work on that next time.
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