Wow! this is really great work! I like how you put in all the ways you can stay safe wherever you are. Next time you could put in how to stay safe on technology.
Hi Helisa , I like how you added in a lot of color. I like how you added in how you would never go anywhere alone that is a great safety choice. Maybe next time you could writ a bit bigger or write about how you can be safe on technology
Hi Helisa, Great work on this drawing. It is so important to know how to keep yourself safe from things that could hurt you. I like the part that said ' I was at home figuring out whether I should go to school or not' because it shows people the dilemmas others have to face. Next time you could make your font bigger so it is easier to read.
Hi my name is Manisha and I am from Waikowhai primary school. I really like your keeping safe poster because it can remind people to be safe. Maybe next time you should right more about keeping safe on your poster so people can see more about being safe and people can do follow the safe rules so they would never get hurt . If you would like to check out my blog, my blog is at http://wpsmanishan.blogspot.co.nz/ BLOG YOU LATER
Wow! this is really great work!
ReplyDeleteI like how you put in all the ways you can stay safe wherever you are.
Next time you could put in how to stay safe on technology.
Hi Tyrell, thank you for your compliments and yes maybe next time, I will talk about staying safe on technology.
DeleteHi Helisa ,
ReplyDeleteI like how you added in a lot of color. I like how you added in how you would never go anywhere alone that is a great safety choice. Maybe next time you could writ a bit bigger or write about how you can be safe on technology
Hi Nikita,
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog and thank you for the compliments and yes maybe next time. Take care
Hi Helisa, Great work on this drawing. It is so important to know how to keep yourself safe from things that could hurt you. I like the part that said ' I was at home figuring out whether I should go to school or not' because it shows people the dilemmas others have to face. Next time you could make your font bigger so it is easier to read.
ReplyDeleteThank you Rheanna for commenting on my blog. Thank you for taking your time to compliment my work. Take care.
DeleteHi my name is Manisha and I am from Waikowhai primary school. I really like your keeping safe poster because it can remind people to be safe. Maybe next time you should right more about keeping safe on your poster so people can see more about being safe and people can do follow the safe rules so they would never get hurt . If you would like to check out my blog, my blog is at http://wpsmanishan.blogspot.co.nz/
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