Hi Helisa, your slideshow about fire tornadoes was very interesting. I didn't know that they could sparks of fire. Your poems about fire tornadoes were well written. Next time you could add more descriptive words in your poem.
Hi Helisa I really learnt a lot of fact. Maybe next time you could add a video. Overall it was really good work. Check out my blog http://pwstanvi.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Helisa, your slideshow about fire tornadoes was very interesting. I didn't know that they could sparks of fire. Your poems about fire tornadoes were well written. Next time you could add more descriptive words in your poem.
ReplyDeleteTalofa Lava, Thank you for your loving compliments Rheanna. I will for sure put more descriptive words in my poem for next time. Take care.
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ReplyDeleteI really learnt a lot of fact.
Maybe next time you could add a video.
Overall it was really good work.
Check out my blog http://pwstanvi.blogspot.co.nz/